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Nice kick, plenty of punch to it. Percs so far sound crisp and clear.
The simple square lead needs more variation here and there. An automated increase of delay and reverb may have worked well on it to build it up during the breakdown. On the whole the square lead loops for too long without any changes in pattern, FX or texture.
The build up in the break in general worked well.
I think the percs need a little more added to them to help give the track more energy as I feel it drags a little as it goes along. Try adding a few more one hit percs here and there to add groove.
Production sounded clean and well mixed. Considering you're still fairly new at this, I would be pleased with this if it was my track. Shows a lot of promise and with a bit more work could be really good 
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