There's lots of work on this track, but I think I've heard your previous track as well, and it looks like you've made quite some progress on the melodic parts! That's good.

Now try to find some good synths that don't sound all too fruity... You can do it, Fruityloops offers many options to alter synths so tht they sound as natural as possible.

Good luck!
LW

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thanks a lot, im going to try wat u said