well constructed song...don't like the melody though...

i liked First Strike mix better. Still a very professional tune as always though!

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hey Gil

I'm afraid to say that this isn't your best tune i think... must be because the melody isn't exactly that outstanding, it's not yet uplifting, but it is melodic... just not exactly my cup of tea

Also, I think your middle sounds were a bit too high when I looked at my winamp's spectrum analyzer, maybe try to focus a bit more on the higher sounds in this track?

Well those are my two cents, keep it up, this isn't your best track, but I know what you're capable of

Laterz!
LW

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The two above kinda sum what I was gonna say... Particularly dislike the melody but that' personal taste so wahtever...

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melody kinda reminds me of "holymen" productions..kinda cheesy, doesn't really go anywhere. but i don't think it's your fault, since you did the remix, not write the melody, right?

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Yes, the melody is a little strange...

but its a very good tune though, sounds professional. I like it

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