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Ok got to have a listen and this is what I think.
I think the track sounds very tinny or computer made. You need to be adding more effects to your syths and samples to give it some air and space. A bit of panning here and there on the drums. Defo some more reverb on the drums and more delay on the synths.
The structure also needs work too. Some of the ideas are great but its just not flowing properly at the moment.
What are you using to produce on by the way?
What I'd do to get some structure to your tracks is take a track you like and create a new and totally orginal track but copy the structure so when they add a new pad, you add your own pad, same with drums etc. See how that works for you. It will teach you how small subtle changes can make a massive difference.
This is only my opinion and I'm not where I want to be with my music but I've done all the above and think its helped me.
Reno
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