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First, try the music producers' forum. It's been kind of dead lately but you're still more likely to get a response there than here.
Second, you've posted a 56 kbps sample on zshare, the shittiest sharing site in the universe. I suggest you host a higher bitrate version somewhere else.
Third, it's not trance. You could maybe make a case for it being breakbeats, but the percussion is really weak and sounds like it's just a repeated sample and maybe a few fills. If it really is original then hopefully you can do some work to give it a lot more punch.
Fourth, it's not polite to bump your threads if you haven't gotten replies. Generally when you don't get replies it's for a reason.
Finally, if you went to town on those drums and did a lot of work to improve the mixing, I think it would be danceable for about a minute or so, after which it gets pretty repetitive. Your basic material's okay but it never changes throughout the entire track.
Hope that helps.
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