I like your opening percs. Nice 'chained bass. The pad / choir is really good too.
Sorry, but I hate your piano/steel guitar (?) instrument. Just personal preference but it's trying to sound like a real instrument and it's not. maybe you could get away with it if it was drowned in reverb but then it wouldn't work as a main feature. If you want a real sound then I'd use a real sample/record it. If it's a more synth kind of sound then it needs to be a lot more interesting/dynamic.
The 4th note of the piano melody sounds like it's a 64th too soon.
I like your percs.
The snare I think doesn't sound splashy enough or a bit mid-y maybe needs EQ'ed?
I agree it's not the most 'dance-to-able' track but there are some nice sounds operating throughout it. I think the piano riff in the breakdown is a little boring and could, perhaps, use a bit more variation.