So it's a breaks track in other words he he...

Actually quite a nice haunting melody but man I just hate those spoken samples.... eeek.

Still sounds a little dry and could do with being given some real depth just to dive it a little sheen. Not a bad offering though.

Not my style but I liked listening to it minus the vocal sample.

Cheers
Nem

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Alright Nemesis,

I opened up some of the instruments and changed the bass completely... I also added some new velocity measures for the new bass. And finally; I got rid of those "nasty" samples.... Anyways, have a listen; I've labelled it "Check This Out (The Depth Mix)"... I hope you enjoy the new mix~!

Dude You didnt even touch that main bass line atall! it was kool in the start but i was really expecting somthing more. sounded sweet though

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Well... I wasn't trying to put the bassline in the spot light... The drums are what I was hoping would give that "wow" effect... But I did change the bass to another synth and the velocities were changed on the bassline...The bassline itself didn't change (i.e. the notes stay the same while the velocity at which they are hit were changed).
I hope that clearifies things better....So again, the drums were meant to take away from the other instruments and that's why the bassline is so simple...