first off sorry for the slowness of rapid-share, anybody recommend a better site to share on?

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this one is more or less done. kinda minimal, not in style but substance. still needs some work as far as goodies and fx.


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this one i'm still working on but dont have a lot of direction with it. maybe you guys can help.

please give feedback
thanks guys

Hi

For some reason couldn't get the first link to work but i gave the second one a listen and i really like it, easy going and quite chilled. Nice clear good quality sounds, the mix of sounds fill the spectrum and it flows along nicely. I'm not much of a fan of psy trance which is sort of what it sounds like to me because of the kick drum and the bass tone but i like it and with a few more additions like you say it will be a good little tune.

Nice one

reDifine

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thats weird, give it another try. thanks for the feedback. what can you say negative about it? stuff that needs to be added/removed.

thanks again
sam

i hate rapidshare!...you can only download 1 thing per day!

Time is ok...but I think you have to add more elements, am I correct? It seems a little too to linear...the curve of climax-growing in the track is like 5 degrees or such, and melody is a bit repetetive and symmetrical...where are the emotions, man.

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Originally posted by Lascodi Time is ok...but I think you have to add more elements, am I correct? It seems a little too to linear...the curve of climax-growing in the track is like 5 degrees or such, and melody is a bit repetetive and symmetrical...where are the emotions, man.

agreed it is repetitive. you think i need to add in some more drastic changes?

begin with adding more and more percussions in the beginning, it could be percussion of some ethnic style drums maybe, and create a more progressive growing groove. the bass-sequence also need more supplements, maybe some added notes to it or maybe some development i the song, or maybe some automated cutoff tweaking, or even a little change of bass-sound in the middle part just to give it a breathing-break.

Also, since youre really going for that 3-note melody I suggest you do something drastic with the sound of it, like automation tweaking which
basically means + and - on reverb, delay, release, attack, decay,cutoff, ressonance, eq, lfo's rate and feedback, adding fx on breaks and fills like low-cut filter or flanging/phasing is also an idea.

Just giving you some tools to work with. I don't know what to do actually.

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Originally posted by Lascodi begin with adding more and more percussions in the beginning, it could be percussion of some ethnic style drums maybe, and create a more progressive growing groove. the bass-sequence also need more supplements, maybe some added notes to it or maybe some development i the song, or maybe some automated cutoff tweaking, or even a little change of bass-sound in the middle part just to give it a breathing-break. Also, since youre really going for that 3-note melody I suggest you do something drastic with the sound of it, like automation tweaking which basically means + and - on reverb, delay, release, attack, decay,cutoff, ressonance, eq, lfo's rate and feedback, adding fx on breaks and fills like low-cut filter or flanging/phasing is also an idea. Just giving you some tools to work with. I don't know what to do actually.

hell yeah man thats some juice. give me a week and ill let you hear what ive got. automation is always the last thing i do just because its a bitch and i hate doing it!

yes, automation is usually what you forget also...but think of it as the the lounges that breathe the music in and out, if its not breathing the brain will get tired and fall asleep listening to it. its like telling a exciting story without any suspense or emotion in the way of telling it.

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Originally posted by Lascodi yes, automation is usually what you forget also...but think of it as the the lounges that breathe the music in and out, if its not breathing the brain will get tired and fall asleep listening to it. its like telling a exciting story without any suspense or emotion in the way of telling it.

wow that statement really speaks to me. i think i should think of this next time i produce a track. this should be a sticky for all to read.


by the way your productions are very interesting.
good job.

downloaded sunshine today! its really cool

anything i can do to it to improve it? i feel like its really lacking