Hey fellaz,


I made a techno track. I would appreciate any thoughts and comments

here comes the music:


http://www.whiteroachproductions.nl..._-_Red_Haze.mp3

Greets PJ

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Originally posted by palm HUGE! hugz

+1

Ace!!

I love techno!

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Woot, Banging tech rythms. I think youre #1 in this forum when it comes to techno. The dark stabs and FX are so great..1:40 when the melody fades in is awesome.
one thing... is it just me or is this track lacking a bass fundament?

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just a little bit of bassline. I figured the "wobbly" synth has enough bass, more bassline gets so crowded.

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listened... not my taste, but anyway, i also think you should add just a tiny bit more bass into it, other than that it sounds gr8, soundwise... im not much of an expert in techno tracks so i cant tell you if the track building is ok or not... i guess you kinda know better then i do...

cheers mate.

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it's great as it is, top stuff man
any chance of a remix pack?

Really enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing!

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cool stuff.. im noticing a bit of crackling on the left side especially towards the begining. dunno if that was intentional or not.

reminds me a bit of technasia

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Originally posted by meDina cool stuff.. im noticing a bit of crackling on the left side especially towards the begining. dunno if that was intentional or not.

I actually mixed in vinyl noise over the entire mix. Call me a nostalgic fool

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Originally posted by Pjotr G I actually mixed in vinyl noise over the entire mix. Call me a nostalgic fool

ahhhh right on.. as long as it was intentional

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send this to picotto now! good enough for alchemy imo. bass is fine. that kick is enough to carry the track on its own. the low pulses under the kick add enough groove to keep it rolling. personally id like to hear a few more short breaks here and there. to break the tune up a bit and add a little variation.

overall a great rolling techno filler track for late at night. a memorable breakdown would make it more of a standout track but it sounds as if it should be this way.

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I must say when I listen on my parents stereo, I understand people's concern with the bass. Maybe I'll patch up another layer of bass

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