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i cant help to feel that the melody progression is not logical, my ear cant really decide what emotion to feel, its kinda like making up a salad with tomatoes potato chips and orange ice cream... well you get the point, im afraid its not my cup of tea, but anyway i tried to listen in an objective way, and if you want to make a thing like i think you want (airbase and such i guess...), you need a more solid line of melody, a good progression of chords, go to a minor scale and than to the major in a rhythmic way (like every 4th bar do a minor progression), use chords of the same base scale, dont switch to an entirely alien scale, unless u want it to feel alien... your sound is very "polite" but on the good side, hope youll succeed..
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