Hi there!

It seems like in some parts of the track you just threw up some notes at random. It's not harmonic, and a bit too chaotic for me. The drums sound nice though.

But maybe I'm criticizing about the style, and that's not the point. I could say it's nicely done tecnically speaking, but definitely not my style.

Take into account that I'm just a newbie on trance. If I were you, I'd wait for some veterans to post comments on your song

i dont like download timers...takes enough time downloading the track if youre not also going to wait half a minute to even start the damn process.

Drums is very good but other stuff is very weird!

Can you upload it to a more reliable file-sharing service? The security image isn't loading for me, so I can't access the track...

Try one of these:

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http://www.sendspace.com/

Thanx for the posts, here is the link to speedyshare :

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Thanks for the upload.

Okay, this sounds really random to me. The different melodic parts seem to be clashing with one another, and the individual melodic parts themselves seem to have little internal logic or purposeful development. A number of the melodic parts also seem out of time to me, like you were trying to play them by hand and not doing very well.

Also some of the percussion parts sound offbeat and strange, almost like you were taking different tracks and mixing them in and out over a main backing beat.

The mastering definitely sounds professional, but other than that you really need to go back to the drawing board with this one and come up with some more coherent ideas.