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Very nice tune so far. I can't help but feel that it has a slightly unfinished quality about it.
Also not sure if the main melody is strong enough to carry it all the way through, feels like it's part of an intro leading up to a main melody.
The breakdown isn't strong enough though, too short, too standard and needs a lot more imagination for this track to really come alive. The track also just resumes rather than really makes a statement which is a shame.
I also get the impression that you are using two kick samples, either that or it's my hearing... if you are then they are slightly out of time so you get a double effect. Not sure if this is what you are going for, but the DJ in me screams in agony and wants to make a correction. 
Well put together, but needs a bit more variation. But some great potential here.
Cheers
Nem
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