very good in general, overall sound is kinda ''thin'', most synths until the last part of the song arent strong enough, but except for that, production is tight

thanks for the comment. it is a bit thin yes.. most likely needs more content, but will leave it like this for now.. new stuff coming hopefully soon anyways.

btw. uploaded again to megaupload (better availability).

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The intro sounded like a DJ intro into a deep house set.

The kick and tempo sounds a tad like house. Then it gets breakish on you before running straight into a dreamy escapade of dreamy-prog. The kick is nice and punchy.

The bass could use a little more definition. It sounds like it has reverb or some sort of chorus on it. The bass could be deeper and more e-bass like so that it cuts through the mix.

Personally, I would tame the kick a little more and thicken out the rest of the elements. I would ditch the current bass and devise a new one. I would create maybe one or two more filter automations and sharpen the clap so that it shines more during the more throttling side-chain moments.

Otherwise, this track has good potential.

Is this really the second song you've written?

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Originally posted by B_man The intro sounded like a DJ intro into a deep house set. The kick and tempo sounds a tad like house. Then it gets breakish on you before running straight into a dreamy escapade of dreamy-prog. The kick is nice and punchy. The bass could use a little more definition. It sounds like it has reverb or some sort of chorus on it. The bass could be deeper and more e-bass like so that it cuts through the mix. Personally, I would tame the kick a little more and thicken out the rest of the elements. I would ditch the current bass and devise a new one. I would create maybe one or two more filter automations and sharpen the clap so that it shines more during the more throttling side-chain moments. Otherwise, this track has good potential. Is this really the second song you've written?

actually this is my 4th song on this project. i agree with the bass though. i have so many bass sounds i could use, but this seemed like a good one at the time.. anyway thanks for the constructive comment. i will probably make some changes on this track in the future.

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You're very talented. Listened to some of your tracks and it's very good. This is great too, kinda thin as someone said but the rest sounds really awesome
Keep up the great work!

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Originally posted by Speactra You're very talented. Listened to some of your tracks and it's very good. This is great too, kinda thin as someone said but the rest sounds really awesome Keep up the great work!

thanks man. really appreciate the comment

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I love this, quality progressive of old, I wish there were more people doing stuff like this still (well Life In streams and a few others are doin this kind of thing which is great).

I dont see anywhere where this track is thin, it sounds fine to me as it is, everythingsspot on to my ears

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Originally posted by djjasonb I love this, quality progressive of old, I wish there were more people doing stuff like this still (well Life In streams and a few others are doin this kind of thing which is great). I dont see anywhere where this track is thin, it sounds fine to me as it is, everythingsspot on to my ears

really appreciate comments like this. it makes me want to do more and more stuff for you guys.

really getting alot of good feedback on my tracks lately (not like "wtf awesomeness!!!", but just generally good feedback). anyway, this is not my favourite song, but it is definately in the top 3 of my own productions as far as sound/atmosphere goes.

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very nice track

thank you sean5

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