Just started working on this last night, and its coming along well so far so I figured I'd put it up for some criticism before I get too narrow-minded about it. First forray into this style too, so any/all criticism or feedback would be totally rad.

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This is very nice. Mix sounds a little muddy, though I don't know what precisely is off, and it could use a bit of panning or stereo widening. But it sounds great as it is, really. Just could use a little polishing.

Keep at it.

I like what you have here so far. Sounds like something that could work well as theme/soundtrack music or for a commercial. Try to find a better sound than the mono sawtooth? sounding thing you have atm, something more lush but thick perhaps. Loving tha gated effect and the sounds you have attached to that. The drums are nice, but If you were to fully push this into theme/soundtrack/commercial type track, maybe minimalise them a bit, but keep that fast moving edge. Would like to hear the next build when you get around to it.

-LL

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wow sounds really cool! the lead sounds a bit dull for my ears, maybe make the lead line a bass line dnb style, big and phasey? i liked it...

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