I see what you are trying to do, but I think your techno track is far better and probably a style that suits you more.

I know that the poster before means. A lot of the tracks do sound a little like they are from a good sound card.
The one that sticks out the most in that manner is the bass sound, something about that sounds reminds me of a demo track that came with the soundblaster 64bit.

Melodically though, it's a nice chilled vibe and is pleasant to listen to but perhaps 12 minutes is a bit too long.

You have some nice musical ideas but perhaps should spend a bit more time when it comes to the sounds that you are putting together. Although they do work together they sound perhaps a little too standard.

Thanks for sharing.

Cheers
Nem

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