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Don't be so hard on yourself.
I actually thought this was okay. Needs some more work. Percussion especially as there is practically none.
The mixing sounded okay and the tune certainly is thumping. My biggest gripe is that all the patterns for each synth are very rigid giving the track a marching feel rather than a driving groove. This isn't helped by the lack of percussion that could help in this area.
If it were me, Id try experimneting with some different midi patterns for your main synths. Even if its just the odd note here and there rather than a complete change. Bringing certain notes forward or back in the right place would really help give the track the rhythm its lacking.
I appreciate this is a hard trance tune and as such needs to be thump thump thump but its too rigid for my taste.
More delay wouldn't go a miss on some of the synths as well.
I thought the vocal was pretty cool 
Keep at it, plenty of potential here
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