Like the tribal rhythm from the off.

low end sounds a tad heavy on my monitors.

Really good use of the All Blacks sample. I actually didn't think it would work but it does.

I like how it kicks back in but the low end of the kick is drowning out the mid bass line for me.

I'm also not sure if the open hat on the off beat suits the groove of the rest of the drums. Not saying you shouldn't have anything on the offbeat but a shorter snappier hat might work better. Just a thought.

Different to the usual stuff on here so well done on that score

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Originally posted by G-Con low end sounds a tad heavy on my monitors. I like how it kicks back in but the low end of the kick is drowning out the mid bass line for me.

I used a 2 samples for the tribal beat, and I think I'm gonna drop the low tom sample, think that's what causing the heavy low + the interference with the mid bass.

I 'm not sure what I will do with the climax after the break

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Originally posted by G-Con I'm also not sure if the open hat on the off beat suits the groove of the rest of the drums. Not saying you shouldn't have anything on the offbeat but a shorter snappier hat might work better. Just a thought.

spot on, should let my ears rest more

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Originally posted by G-Con Really good use of the All Blacks sample. I actually didn't think it would work but it does.

was quite surprised myself, especially cuz it wasn't beatmatched or anything. I think this might be the case because the ending isn't abrupt, in ends in fading crowd

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Originally posted by G-Con Different to the usual stuff on here so well done on that score

I do my best to be original, not to copy some famous producer or sound


thnx mate, very helpfull comment

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