and the rain and piano starts........smoth like it
the kick needs to be stronger, why?
check your track, when the bassline starts, "eats" the kick
i mean, you can´t hear it

but thats just a Technical opinion, the tech aspects you will learn to improve them with time

i have to say that you have good melodyes and ideas, and for me, thats the most important thing

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So Serene

The beggining , (very n-trance) , i think you should keep the weather fx going for a while longer, The kick needs to be stronger , the hooklines are perfect , bassline is ok but kick needs to overpower it not vice versa like gabriel said.

overall very good tune
Just need to home in on the production side

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Definitely bring up the kick. I feel like some mids are missing from the percussion.

Good intro track stuff.

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