Not really my style, but production-wise it sounds like you have some decent tracks on your hands. The vocals on both the songs sound muffled, though, like they should be "brighter." I couldn't understand the lyrics very easily a lot of the time.
Maybe you could find a way to bring them out somehow?
Also, I really didn't like the whole "kick explosion" thing, as that's very overused. You should probably find a more original way to move the track along.
I could see both of these being signed as they are, though.
Aug-06-2008 23:16
davemolina
Team Westphal
Registered: May 2005
Location: San Antonio, USA
Not really my style either, but it sounds good. I like how the track comes back in after the first vocals in "If I Could Fly".
If I still played Trance I'd consider playing it.
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Aug-07-2008 04:09
csfp
tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2008
Location: Midlands, England
Thx 4 comments, much appreciated
As for the vocals a brightness, thats a bit of a thing with myspace compression, it always messes up with high freq. I'm always afraid not to over-do-it with vocal levels (it can make a track sound weak in the club environment), but I guess taking them a little higher is a thing to consider : )
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Aug-07-2008 08:35
csfp
tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2008
Location: Midlands, England
Any 1 else would like to add a comment ? ...
... plz ?
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Aug-14-2008 15:05
Gabriel Cazali
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2008
Location: Guatemala
hey
the first track i heard its Skydivers dream
good quality, nice sound , the percs work pretty good for me
not my style, but you make a good work here.
Reflexes:
like the way u used the vocals , mmm it gets a lil bit to repetitive!
i would like to hear a nice "bridge" on this one
good tracks, again, not my stall at all, but good job