dont actually know what to call this track yet. fairly happy with it so far but cant seem to be able to come up with a bassline that i like so ive gone with a simple offbeat bass. any ideas would be greatly appreciated! I still have a long way to go to getting my production up to the level i would like so would love to get some feedback so i can improve myself..

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perclines and kick
are pretty good men, rlly! nice one.

but the sounds, and melows
it all sounds like "VANGUARD vst" to me , nothing special here =0/

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Originally posted by Gabriel Cazali perclines and kick are pretty good men, rlly! nice one. but the sounds, and melows it all sounds like "VANGUARD vst" to me , nothing special here =0/

id say pratice pratice pratice and yes moer pratice.sounds like you got an idea you just havent learnt how to make your own sounds yet.

I think some more reeverb would make this sound sooo much better. I like the melodies.

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Originally posted by Gabriel Cazali perclines and kick are pretty good men, rlly! nice one. but the sounds, and melows it all sounds like "VANGUARD vst" to me , nothing special here =0/

funnily enough i do have vanguard but i didnt use it at all in this track... but yeah most of the synths are presets ive messed around with on z3ta... i did try to change them a bit but obviously not enough haha. thanks for the comments - appreciate it man

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Originally posted by airwalker1 id say pratice pratice pratice and yes moer pratice.sounds like you got an idea you just havent learnt how to make your own sounds yet.

yeah writing my own patches is something i really do need to work on. thanks for the listen and comments... any ideas on where i can find some tutorials on synthesis?

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Originally posted by parafrNalia I think some more reeverb would make this sound sooo much better. I like the melodies.

thanks man

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Originally posted by slippery ninja funnily enough i do have vanguard but i didnt use it at all in this track... but yeah most of the synths are presets ive messed around with on z3ta... i did try to change them a bit but obviously not enough haha. thanks for the comments - appreciate it man yeah writing my own patches is something i really do need to work on. thanks for the listen and comments... any ideas on where i can find some tutorials on synthesis? thanks man

your welcome =) sorry if it sound tu strong my coment
but i think that when it comes to music , its the only way

ok some ideas hmmm
add som fx to the melows, Xdelays (paning delays)
sidechains can work to (but try to use it as minimum as posible)

Z3ta its a great vst, a loooooooooooooot of prests/sounds
but for me , not a good choice for Main melows, only for background stuff (personal thig of course)

i can hear that you put a lot of stuff in your track, thats good
but sometimes less its more

see ya at your next topic!

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Originally posted by Gabriel Cazali your welcome =) sorry if it sound tu strong my coment but i think that when it comes to music , its the only way ok some ideas hmmm add som fx to the melows, Xdelays (paning delays) sidechains can work to (but try to use it as minimum as posible) Z3ta its a great vst, a loooooooooooooot of prests/sounds but for me , not a good choice for Main melows, only for background stuff (personal thig of course) i can hear that you put a lot of stuff in your track, thats good but sometimes less its more see ya at your next topic!

strong comments are good sometimes and i didnt take it hard - i like to hear where im going wrong so i can improve. had a good listen to ur myspace tracks - awesome stuff - right up my alley.
thanks for the tips

add a extra bass (distorted) is what id do

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Originally posted by zentient1 add a extra bass (distorted) is what id do

possibly... just dont like the whole offbeat bassline so might just get rid of it and write a new bassline

I like it mate I lie it for what it is dont change shit. Its your tune man you were feeling it at the time so let it run.

The sounds are just very common presets thats all but hey those presets are what everyone started in this thing with

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Originally posted by Sonic_c I like it mate I lie it for what it is dont change shit. Its your tune man you were feeling it at the time so let it run. The sounds are just very common presets thats all but hey those presets are what everyone started in this thing with

thanks for the listen and kind words. have been reading up a bit on making my own patches... all kind of scary - i get the general gist of it so far just gonna practise making my own patches for a while before i start writing again.