trying to understand why no one is leaving feedback.

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Originally posted by bottledz trying to understand why no one is leaving feedback.

well alow me to get the ball rolling for you.sounds like you had a nice idea on the go but it lacked any direction.ie it went no ware, try doing somthing more with the pianos and maybe work on the build up,as a said the idea was good. Now put some heart in to it.because the key to the genure your tring to creat is all about getting to the key moments of the track pice by piece.and im afraid your track sounded like it was on one big loop.hope this helps?

whats up!
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE the pads men, really nice job there
dont like that hihat u used, sounds to "housy" but love the perclines

so the piano starts in the bridge
mmm i think you can make it better its to simple, and sometimes it feels off time :S :S check that

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So Serene

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Originally posted by Gabriel Cazali whats up! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE the pads men, really nice job there dont like that hihat u used, sounds to "housy" but love the perclines so the piano starts in the bridge mmm i think you can make it better its to simple, and sometimes it feels off time :S :S check that

Cool cool....Yeah i Feel you on the piano, It's such a pain in the ass as all of it was drawn in. I'm waiting to get a Midi keyboard. then i'll be able to take the piano and keynotes a little further.

I actually favor the house, progressive house sound, some borderline trance, but not real big on the anthem sound.

this is also my 4th track

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Its repetative, but very good, housey with nice bit of Max Graham style beefy bass coming in later.

A proper piano line or two and stronger strings would improve this.

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Originally posted by djjasonb Its repetative, but very good, housey with nice bit of Max Graham style beefy bass coming in later. A proper piano line or two and stronger strings would improve this.

Cool cool. I appreciate all the feedback I'll take the feedback and apply it to My future stuff i might even try to go back into this one and add some stuff maybe even condense it a little bit. Like i said this is only my 4th completed track and i actually had to teach the good majority of Reason to myself, so at least. I moving in the right direction.

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