Hey guys back again after making "Epic Wish" which was originally for a competition (which didn't happen... damn you ITM!!!)

Anyway I hope you guys like this song, its very different from my others and although this sounds corny.. But I feel like I managed to place my emotions at the time into this song.

I want to give credit to Radialis (My good friend) who helped me with the main synth (You'll hear properly in the main breakdown of the song) as without his help it would still be unfinished.

ALL and any comments are welcome especially constructive. Sorry about the sample rate since it is a big song.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/4905bx

If you have any issues with the link I'll have it on Myspace soon too.

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Hey just thought I'd add that the song is on http://www.myspace.com/nemiard now for streaming instead of downloading the song.
Would be greatful for any comments guys!

PS. Song starts slow in begining but picks up a little later in the tune.

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Last edited by Nemiard on Oct-24-2008 at 10:15

lovely pianos/intro, myke foyle style!

i rlly like it

very personal opinion:
try another bassline, meaby an acoustic one

the perclines could have more dynamic , their a lil bit to simply

nice and trancy

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