Hi guys, just been speaking to D4Dirty records but remembered this had been played so suppose it can't be signed now, however I wanted some feedback anyway.

Please checkout my sample here, is not finished at all yet! but please feedback.

Cheers,
Terry

http://www.terrybarker.com/Destruction.mp3

i would add more drums, perhaps tone down the synth.

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thanks for the reply!

this is thrown together, no mastering very little levelling so i am very aware of that haha.

so i take it the idea is good?

Some cool things happening with this track.

I agree with the above reply re: the synth, i.e., it's far too loud (overpowering the drums).

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Originally posted by Nick Cenik Some cool things happening with this track. I agree with the above reply re: the synth, i.e., it's far too loud (overpowering the drums).

cheers for the reply, yeah as i said above its thrown together a bit with regards to mastering etc etc. I posted the sample to get ideas back on the overall tune and sound.

Cheers
Terry

Apart from the loudness of that synth, I think its coming along nicely

ok, thanks for all the feedback, the link has been updated, let me know your thoughts.

http://www.terrybarker.com/destruction.mp3

Cheers

I really like the sound of this. Fairly simple but it works.

I'd call it more house than techno (not that it matters)

Probably just needs few more FX and random incidentals occuring here and there.

Promising stuff

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Thanks for the reply's, the link's now updated, probablys the final version now, re-wrote the perc lines, did not put in more phases and transitions as i'm going for a simplistic feel. Bit of a remaster etc haha

http://www.terrybarker.com/destruction.mp3

Terry

like the bassline
but not a big fan for the main melow

meaby another synth?
and yeah, some more elements will make the track fell a lil bit less empty in some parts

again: nice bassline

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