I just finished a track that I've been working on for a couple days. I think it's better then my previous stuff. Some feedback would be nice. I want to know if I'm heading in the right direction and if I'm actually improving. The track is on my myspace. It's called "Bitter Fruit". Here's the link:

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cf...endid=428080712

Its a good track , but i feel that you might want to add a little bit more percussions to it.

I would recommend , simply adding semiquavered closed hi hats beats might sound awesome

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What exactly do you mean by semiquavered?

Quaver = eighth note.

Semiquaver = sixteenth note.