A while back i made a track called elementia and someone said it would be better if it had no 4x4 beat and just left alone. So i set to work and smoothed off some of the sounds and tweaked it a little bit.
i can hear a few bits clipping , but other than that i thinks is nearly finished.
Registered: Jul 2008
Location: Perth, Western Australia
The melody and sound is quite lovely. Interesting choice.
I guess constructivly only thing I can suggest is possibly some more minor/subtle effects and sounds to come through at random points in the track.
Although it would seem personal taste, as I do like the movement of the track in its simplicity. Doing this might possibly disturb that feel - Might be a challenge to do so.
Have to agree, this has a nice relaxed "spacey" sound to it. I think it works fine as it is, although it does drag a bit in the second half when there's nothing new going on. I think you could either shorten it a little or else put a bit more variation toward the end.
Nov-19-2008 15:50
adi_hanson
feels a newbie.
Registered: Dec 2007
Location: Blackburn
cheers for the comments ,
But i dont want to alter the tune as mentioned before enough to ruin it. Maybe a few subtle sweeps?
[Ambient/chillout/orchestral?] Elementia
