You've got a good start here, but it's clipping like crazy. I'm guessing you'll fix that when you can mix on speakers rather than earbuds...

Love that phasey sound in the second half.

Creative arrangement as well. You never disappoint in that department.

Don't listen to them ashley. its awful, you need to think more carefully what the music is doing. But you have some nice ideas, just it's all over the place.

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The arrangement is very creative,and there are always some good sounds to be heard. This is closer to trance (i am talking about the second one) than any of todays uplifting. It's of poor quality which takes away from the experience but your mixing is so much better than from when i first heard you. And there is easily enough ideas for like 8 tracks but that is what i enjoy about your music, the most, it really helps me be more creative with my arrangements.

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Originally posted by ******** Here is a track that was derived from the first one but not quite the same thing http://williamashley.info/mp3/final_414.mp3

great talent here the second one later half sounding somewhat detroit ish......


keep up the good work

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Originally posted by goodtime Don't listen to them ashley. its awful, you need to think more carefully what the music is doing. But you have some nice ideas, just it's all over the place.

This is the most hypocritical thing I have ever seen. After the random shit you have posted as your groundbreaking world conquering trance.

Looking forward to your usual response, over use of the word gimp etc or have you found some new adjectives especially for me???

To be honest I think experimenting regardless of how random or unusual something sounds is what more people should embrace. Otherwise we would have become sick of electronic music long ago.
I mean theres a mixed responce towards your music, but at the same time I'm sure you'd be growing in areas that most prudish people who stick to the same genres will never experience.

I say keep it up and see how things pan for the future, you can only get better aye

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i really like it, very creative i must say!

But it clips like hell

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Originally posted by Prototrance This is the most hypocritical thing I have ever seen. After the random shit you have posted as your groundbreaking world conquering trance. Looking forward to your usual response, over use of the word gimp etc or have you found some new adjectives especially for me???

No. you are entitled to your opinion

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