the kick it has to much low freq
try to use something with high freq (both kicks will be a great idea)
the melows in min 2, i think that they are FANTASTIC
the trancelines, well.... sound great but to typical trance

work more on your perclines, to give your track more dynamic!

overall, nice job!!!!!!!!

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So Serene

Ok Thanks i will use all this in consideration. What could i do to make the perclines more dynamic?

Thanks again for your time

-Archie

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