listening..

trippy intro, quite deep, liking the high pitch piercing sounds, is that a loop? did you make that yourself? anyway
1:00 beat starts, like the effects, great intro..
1:22 kick and bass allights great, however, usually when kick and bass introduced first, you want to make em sound at best, at least in the beggining, does not quite work here due to atmosphere intervienes too much imho, anyway, bass sounds good with the kick, great rhythm and all, 2:13 great FX throughout.. loving the atmosphere once again, great use of delays, 2:50 lead introduced, very very nice. breakdown introduced without any drum rolls or clashes or rev clashes, 4:21 here we go again, again awesome effects, i love the panning, question, what bmp did you start writing initially, could it be that it was perhaps higher or lower and then you raised it or lowered it? just curious.

5:15, i love this...
i really do, this is just great great stuff bro.
one thing though, not a single effect sound dry, they all sound processed, dont forget about sugar and space mate, if most of your effects sound wide, make one at least sound mono.
6:35, this is dark.
8:50, again i love this part, its really really good, however the whole track seem to be sort of.. streched no? cut some parts and just make it 7 min or so, or make gems out of brakedowns.

Now some technical feedback, i think although both kick and bass sound in the same tonality sort of thing, and tone or colour, i think kick is too, bassy, maybe the right eq will help, now there are only two ways of doing it, cutting eq from bass and boosting the kick and vice versa, depends what works. the whole track sounded a little too over processed to me, as if elements within the mix overlap with each other, making bass hard to distinguish.

btw, this tune reminds me of johan bley a lot. in terms of sound. little fluctuation in lower regions of sound spectrum.

dude question at 3:39, what vst is that thats an awesome sound.

Cyber hook me up with a midi from your old tune and i will gladly rmx it for ya.

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Last edited by MegaMan on Dec-01-2008 at 00:50

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Originally posted by MegaMan listening.. trippy intro, quite deep, liking the high pitch piercing sounds, is that a loop? did you make that yourself? anyway 1:00 beat starts, like the effects, great intro.. 1:22 kick and bass allights great, however, usually when kick and bass introduced first, you want to make em sound at best, at least in the beggining, does not quite work here due to atmosphere intervienes too much imho, anyway, bass sounds good with the kick, great rhythm and all, 2:13 great FX throughout.. loving the atmosphere once again, great use of delays, 2:50 lead introduced, very very nice. breakdown introduced without any drum rolls or clashes or rev clashes, 4:21 here we go again, again awesome effects, i love the panning, question, what bmp did you start writing initially, could it be that it was perhaps higher or lower and then you raised it or lowered it? just curious. 5:15, i love this... i really do, this is just great great stuff bro. one thing though, not a single effect sound dry, they all sound processed, dont forget about sugar and space mate, if most of your effects sound wide, make one at least sound mono. 6:35, this is dark. 8:50, again i love this part, its really really good, however the whole track seem to be sort of.. streched no? cut some parts and just make it 7 min or so, or make gems out of brakedowns. Now some technical feedback, i think although both kick and bass sound in the same tonality sort of thing, and tone or colour, i think kick is too, bassy, maybe the right eq will help, now there are only two ways of doing it, cutting eq from bass and boosting the kick and vice versa, depends what works. the whole track sounded a little too over processed to me, as if elements within the mix overlap with each other, making bass hard to distinguish. btw, this tune reminds me of johan bley a lot. in terms of sound. little fluctuation in lower regions of sound spectrum. dude question at 3:39, what vst is that thats an awesome sound. Cyber hook me up with a midi from your old tune and i will gladly rmx it for ya.

Thanks a lot mate! Exactly the kind of feedback that I need.

the synth @3:39 is z3ta at work.

which midis do you want m8?

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Pretty cool track. Loved the intro.

IMO it goes on for a bit too long, but I'll listen again and reassess my thoughts on that.

Love the intro.

The song kinda seem a bit long for my taste. I like how you went into a different key at around 6:35 for the bass. It adds another layer tension to the music. One complaint is that the melody line seems too fleeting(?) . I keep on waiting for a melody to develop but I don't get it. But then again, this is strictly preference issue so I'm sure others will be perfectly fine w/ this sort of arrangement. And overall, very good job, dude.

Not my piece of cake, but i liked it. It did feel a little too repetitive at times, and at times it felt like it was getting really good and then would loose momentum. I think if you made it about 2 minutes shorter it would be better...

i want something of a 16 bar melody or less, that swims within 2-3 octave range, preferably ear catching and old.

if you have anything like that, and you are willing to share with me, upload it to [[ LINK REMOVED ]]
and let me know the link and the work will begin!

needs to be a midi file, that contains that melody, bass and other elements are not necessary.

p.s. always wanted to remix nostradamus for ya, but i dont have those cool effects that you have

if you have em in .wav, zip it, upload it and that could work also.

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typicaly you have all the right components that you exspsect to hear from a good psy track so good stuff.

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