surprised not to see any comments on this, i dig! at some points i think the main lead with the distortion, bitcrushing needs to take a sweep down in the 1k area (just sounds harsh after a while).

love the flips & fills... i'm a man of many of those haha.

piano is a bit too retro for me and i hear a really dissonant tone at the end of the piece, perhaps u have an extra note in your midi file.

other than that dude good job, mix is good.

check out mine when u have a sec:

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...0&forumid=74&s=

thanks man, really appreciate you taking the time to listen

hmm you reckon the piano should be changed then? That was a bit I was quite proud of but ah well lol. :P

Yeh your right, im gonna sort the lead a lil bit then i'm near enough done on this.

Of course, i'll get straight onto listening matey!

Thanks

Paul

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anyone else had time to listen? thanks

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made a couple of updates to it, bit cleaner etc more depth

See what you think
www.soundclick.com/fractureduk

thanks!

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paul,

sounds much better! i don't mean to sound naive but are there labels putting this kind of trancey/breaks out? if so i think its worth a demo submission.

however i still hear that really dissonant piano tone at 1:51, your chords and melodies are very smooth and that dissonance ruins it.

good luck

A

hey man! glad you like the improvements, yeh your right i think ill get rid of that, its just a slightly off key note that i thought would add something different but it doesnt reli work. Your no more naive than me mate, I have no idea, breaks labels dont seem to be interested, there is one label that really want it but they mainly churn out funky/dirty breaks so i have no idea what to do or where to send it lol.

If anyone has any ideas please do tell me

Thanks again

Paul

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