Not bad by you and your brother...not bad at all. The only thing I was missing, was some sort of markant lead with a hook starting from the middle of the break, the hook could maybe have evolved itself hiding some parts until the beat came back in.

The bass was perfect, drums good, atmosphere excellent...I was just missing that little melody starting from the break...something to brighten up the mix from the middle.

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Thanks for the review......i'll definately appreciate the feedback. I still need to play around with the track a bit so will keep in mind the suggestion.

Hey. very nice i like it. I agree with Lascodi. the only thing i think t was missing was a synth of some sort b4 the breakdown and something new during the breakdown

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Would love to hear it again, once you have masterinded a neat little hook for the best bit Also it sounds a little weird when the silence pause comes after break just before the beat is hammering in, when there is actually no actually change...just drums added on. One need some special new energy after such a silence.

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Thanks for the honesty guys.....i'll definately repost the track once i've figured out a catchy hook:-)

as for the TTD mix, well if you would like the track let me know i'll send it to you, so you can hear the whole thing i guess.