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hi, the idea is there but you have a lot of work to do on the percsion and bass. the melodies are ok and its not a bad basses for a tune but you need to work on the kicks bass ect. hope ive been helpfull

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I have put a 50Hz tone with the kick and a gate sometimes, but I thought the kick sounded pretty good without it. maybe I'll ad something like that. As far as the percs, It's definently an area I need improvement in. I will say though they used to be a lot worse. I used to use an open on the off beat and a shaker and that's about it. Also I only have like one transition in there at the end of the breakdown, which I think sounds ok, but I probably need some more.

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