just a couple days ago i was bored at work and i was doodelin around on some paper and i started to write a poem. something i have never done cause i have no writing skills what~so~ever. but they actually came out ok. not great but ok.. i was wondering if anyone has any poems they have written that they would like to share. id share mine but i forgot exactly how they go and they are at home but ill bring them to work tomorrow and put em up. =)
peace
xox
-layla
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Jun-11-2002 17:21
Orbax
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I will bring back the Haiku thread. Post it there
Jun-11-2002 18:18
Glyph
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2001
Location: San Diego Ca.
Yeah, I've actually got a bunch of them. Like you, I'd never written one either. Then, thanks to a woman and a bad case of unrequited love, I went through this phase like 6 years ago. I actually placed first in a contest and won $500. Pretty cool. Anyway, if you'd like to check 'em out they're here
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Jun-12-2002 00:28
davinox
diving deep into sound
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: you could say i'm from dallas
the only poem i actually took time to write.
spossively it's going to be published in some shitty poetry.com book. ahh...i bet they tell that to all the writers...
go to http://www.poetry.com/
search up my name. (David Merriman)
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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.
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Jun-12-2002 00:37
cHiLD
tranceaddict
Registered: May 2002
Location: London, England
I've got some of my original lyrics and poems on my site: jadedchild
feel free to look around
Jun-12-2002 02:01
Orbax
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post a pic of yourself somewhere child
Jun-12-2002 02:03
JM
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2000
Location: Seattle, USA
only time i write poems, or anything as such is when i'm frustrated with things. i then use poems to release that frustration, and let some feelings out in a positive way. i will not share my latest poem, it is just too deep, and you guys would probably think i'm nuts haha...
>JM<
Jun-12-2002 02:37
Slylee
love lockdown
Registered: May 2001
Location: Hollywood, FL
A guy sticks his location,
In a girl's destinstion,
To increase the population,
For the next generation.
Do you get my explanation?
Or do you need a demonstration?
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man i can't believe i tried to come off as responsible in that other thread, i am so full of shit just don't tell anyone
Jun-12-2002 04:07
Orbax
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hands on demo?
Like jewels in a crown, the precious stones glittered in the queen's round metal hat.
Jun-12-2002 04:09
u4ea:[soulstar]
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: May 2001
Location:
Hmm.. Been a while since I wrote any prose. I'll post this one I wrote some 5 years ago:
In the Twilight of the morning hour
The stillness is silent and the air is breathless.
When darkness welcomes all to sleep,
I will welcome your embrace,
Know the velvet warmth
Of baby rabbits close to me.
And know nothing else
but the serenity that bathes my soul.
As my eyes crumble and close
Into mortal bliss,
Time will hold its breath,
For always.
poetry
haha...
