It's deep trancy song I just finished...It doesn't sound that bad. Give me some pointers. Thanks!


http://www.zshare.net/audio/565749611653452f/

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I think the lead that comes in, could be developed substantially, and I thought it was just a smidge too prominent, in the mix.

The transitions seem a little sudden and more based on muting and unmuting certain tracks than they are based in any sort of meaningful progression.

It's very repetitive. It doesn't sound like very much, beyond the track combinations, evolve.

I like the mix. The ideas you have down are very pretty and easy on the ears, but I think there needs to be some real development of this song.

Thanks a lot for the comment. I'm gonna keep working on it.

Just keep working at it. You got potential bro. Try watching tutorial videos for whatever program you use. I laughed at this idea at first, but it does teach you some things you might not know! cheers.