It's 6:17 am, I'm tired and here's my first draft of my Robert Miles - Children remix.

Still unmastered, but what the hey...

Enjoy.

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I would suggest having your volume cranked up for this, to fit in all of the bass.

Feel free to lay on the critique.

Last edited by Kage_ on Feb-24-2009 at 20:32

Very enjoyable, but i would a bit more on the plucky 8th notes, they still sound a tad cheap, overall i liked listening to it very relaxing.

Thanks man.

For taking one of the most over-played tunes of 1998-99, and having your way with it, good job, seriously.

Very minimal, but I could hear it building up to or coming down from a peak in a DJ set. I think I wanted it to go a nuts at a certain point and a little disappointed that it didn't but, the bottom line is that it sounded cool.

i really like it. 3.58 onwards is bouncy.

good shout. could i maybe use it at one of my club nights?

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Thanks for the feedback guys.

And sure ZeJayMan, you can use it.

thanks dude. YOu got a myspace?

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Yeah, here's the link.

http://www.myspace.com/kagemakesmusic

More tracks to be added to it v.soon.

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I like it, but I think the buildups could have used a tad bit more energy.


I think you could have came in with a bassier kick too, starting @ 2:04. Seems like a lot of empty space. Or atleast bring in that sub bassline that comes in at 2:19, earlier. You could have added in some white noise also to bring energy to that first build up like you did at 4:18.


That second part is the best IMO. It has the most energy and really carries the song. Nice electro bassline. I also like that pad synth you introduce @ 5:04, nicely mixed. Maybe you could have added in the piano back somewhere though.

Cool song bro, I enjoyed it.

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Originally posted by BOOBOOSD I like it, but I think the buildups could have used a tad bit more energy. I think you could have came in with a bassier kick too, starting @ 2:04. Seems like a lot of empty space. Or atleast bring in that sub bassline that comes in at 2:19, earlier. You could have added in some white noise also to bring energy to that first build up like you did at 4:18. That second part is the best IMO. It has the most energy and really carries the song. Nice electro bassline. I also like that pad synth you introduce @ 5:04, nicely mixed. Maybe you could have added in the piano back somewhere though. Cool song bro, I enjoyed it.

Thanks for the feedback. I didn't really want this song to be climactic, so I opted for the mellow, minimal route. Some may not agree it was the wise path. :P Each to his own.

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Originally posted by Kage_ Thanks for the feedback. I didn't really want this song to be climactic, so I opted for the mellow, minimal route. Some may not agree it was the wise path. :P Each to his own.

Sure to each their own. I just wasn't sure exactly what you were going after. Anyways, what you did, still works. I was just suggesting ideas, but whatever.

Thanks. I always take critique and suggestions on board.

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