hi everyone ,
this as another track composed and produced by me
you're comments and advices are very welcome

(Song Link)

thank you

Normally, you'd get me hectoring you to upload a file to a file hoster. There are still what seem like some aliasing artifacts but the bottom line is that YouTube HQ is much better.






And this tune is veeeerry pretty.

I think the overall bassline is a little thin and needs to come up in the 300-800 kHz range by a few dB. The second half of the song is a little loud in the higher ranges. I think if you lower the higher parts in the mix you should be able to bring the kick in balance with the rest of the tune by upping the master. The kick has a nice, overall presence, though.

Nice showing!

thank you so much for your constructive criticism ,I really appreciate it
and I will work on it the next time

anyway I've uploaded the mp3
http://www.mediafire.com/?yfyknz1utiu

thanx again

Nice Track
3aaash

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Life is to short to listen to something else than Trance

than you so much
eshta

The plucks seems not to be in tune with the bass?
(at 0:25)

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