hi Ezet, I am checking your track out now.

as someone who has been making electronic music since the age of 13 (i'm almost 26!) my best advice is to keep learning and experimenting! there is no right or wrong way to make music, just continue to learn and figure out your own style. it will take you at least 1 year of solid practice to get to a level of comfort.

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after listening to your track its actually hard to believe you've only been producing for 2 weeks. I've heard people's tracks who have been working for 2 years that don't have as much technique as this song. Granted it does need a bit of work on flow and building, but the melodies are very nice and has a good atmosphere. for a 'first track' its way above par.

so with that said i'd say either your musical future is very bright, or a bunch of pre-made loops were used.

what kind of software did you use for this track?

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Thank you for your positive comments Psilogod, much appreciated! I've been at it roughly two weeks, perhaps 3 if counting the period before I actually had any software/hardware, which I spent reading forums and tutorials.

As far as loops go I've never actually used loops for anything, and I have yet to figure out why I'd want to use loops instead of oneshots etc. Perhaps someone could enlighten me as to why and how often loops are being used in quality EDM productions?

I'm using Ableton Live at the moment, coupled with various free/cheap vst's. I might try FL Studio, but at the moment I'm happy with Ableton, and the other DAWs are mostly outside of my price range.

Aside from that, do you have any specific suggestions or ideas for parts I should work on? Again any constructive feedback is most welcome, be it positive or negative

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this was pretty good
i think maybe if you brought the level of the bassline up a bit so it was more noticable, it would be even better!

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i like it but imo the kick is too strong and the bassline is too soft, after adjusting those it should sound awesome

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Very chill. Unbelievable to be someones first track.

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The point isn't to "get out of your body", it's to bring awareness to your consciousness while you're experiencing another reality.

This track is incredibly atmospheric and chill. I'll join the crowd and also reiterate that it's amazing to think that you've only been producing for two weeks. This is actually really, really good. I agree that the bassline could be brought up in level to compliment the kick.

I'm guessing you have some musical background... very rare for this quality of production to come from someone just starting out. My first track did NOT sound like this... and I grew up around a lot of musical influence.

Anyways, cheers for a great track... I think I'll actually keep this one around for a bit to listen to. I'd damn near play this one out. It could use a few finishing touches, though. Starting with making that bass a little more prominent.

Excellent job!

Feel free to give my tracks a listen if you have a moment.

yay, cheers for the motivating feedback, I really appreciate it! I'll definitely try out the suggestions provided, and I'll let you know when a new version is up.

David.Michael: Well, I used to be a drummer in a band, so you're right. I've also been DJing for years, and my work and involvement with LiquidFM and EDM in general has probably provided me with some useful insight aswell.

I'll make sure to check out your tracks and comment to the best of my ability.

I just hope this isn't "first timer luck". :P

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Originally posted by ezet yay, cheers for the motivating feedback, I really appreciate it! I'll definitely try out the suggestions provided, and I'll let you know when a new version is up. David.Michael: Well, I used to be a drummer in a band, so you're right. I've also been DJing for years, and my work and involvement with LiquidFM and EDM in general has probably provided me with some useful insight aswell. I'll make sure to check out your tracks and comment to the best of my ability. I just hope this isn't "first timer luck". :P

Doesn't sound like luck to me... sounds like potential.

I am frankly finding it hard to believe you have been producing for 2 weeks, but if so - that comment can only be a compliment right?

Well, cool relaxed track.....

I think people use loops cause, well some of us are a bit lazy and u can get some great sounds from them. I would say dont be scared of using them, its all about what sounds good and not about how wildly original it is. I think using loops in this may help, u never know.

some people even make their own synth sounds from scratch.. Im far too lazy to do this myself, but kudos to those that do.

Anyway, keep it up mate

Okay, I've worked some more on the mix and made some adjustments to the kick and bass among other things, as some of you suggested.

Also reworked the percussion and some synths slightly. The download link is still the same.

I've noticed the volume is quite low compared to other tracks now thou, guess I'll have to read more on mastering and loudness.

Feedback is welcome as always

http://www.krisd.com/dl/kris_d-indeed.mp3

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Last edited by ezet on Apr-21-2009 at 16:55