With loads of motivation from the feedback on my first track, I've made my second one. This time it's more progressive, and I've focused some more on details, trying to learn new things. Also tried to keep it less melodic, but this seems to be a serious problem for me really.. I've worked out alot of ideas but they always come out too melodic for some reason.

Anyways, hope you like it, feedback appreciated as always!

I'd like to know if it's okay as it is, if it's missing something or too crowded. I know the mixing can always be improved, specific suggestions would be great. And anything else you can think of.

http://www.krisd.com/dl/kris_d-sauna.mp3

And I'll include this version, which is what I originally started with, but it came out too melodic imo. so I didn't bother finishing it, and remade it into the other one.

http://www.krisd.com/dl/kris_d-sensei.mp3

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Last edited by ezet on Apr-28-2009 at 10:17

There seems to be some problem with your links. Tried to get them directly from your homepage but with the same result. Says that there is no file.

/MG

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Owh, I'm sorry. It should be sorted now, thanks for letting me know

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I've reworked the percussion and some other things slightly, let me know what you think

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Hi ezet,

I'm probably not the best person to comment on this track cause i dont usually listen to this kind of trance, however.
I can tell you that i thought d-sensei was the better version.

Both tracks sound chilled and almost ambient, but i prefered the melody in the second one.
I wasn't to keen on the sidechaining in the first one, it didn't seem to fit in with your style of music. imo.

Sorry i can't be of more help mate.