bump?

___________________

Bring on my soundcloud ya!

This is definitely kind of a cool song. I think it could use a little development as it gets a skosh repetitive, in parts. The rhythm doesn't seem to evolve as much as I'd like it to and I'm not happy with the chintzy sounding open hi-hat. The mix just sounds a little flat, too.

The good news is that this tune has more than half a chance at being a respectable song, given a little more time and energy. I love the variation in the chord progression and how the synth is detuned. The breaks are very well laid out, within the arrangement.

All in all, a good showing. Take my advice with a grain of salt, but I do like the tune. I think, with a little more work, it could be really cool.

___________________

Now with extra singles!
my old stuff, not quite up to snuff - but I still dig it - UPDATED 9/23/2012

cheers for the feedback , firstly for the hi hat , you can see on the waveform it puts a high pitched mist on it , and does need sorting , and i got a little exited and rushed the last quarter of the song , but i will go back and get it interesting.

cheers anyhow

___________________

Bring on my soundcloud ya!