Listening in, the synth work in the beggining is very cool, when the second part of the melody comes in @ 43 seconds, I think you should loop it again, so it lasts 8 bars and not just 4. The pads are cool too. Nice melody overall.

Not gonna go any further, as it's youtube, but I listened through and it kept me interested

Cool track, sleeping! It's got some great melodies and nice blend of sounds and textures. I really like the arpy pattern at 2:35 - it's hard to explains, but it sets a cool tone for this track.

I agree with Owsey about the youtube quality - that ultra-low quality compression doesn't do the track any favors. Any chance you could upload a decent mp3 version somewhere? Either way, nice work with this one!

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lead sound and melody is nice..hard to judge the production quality based on the low quality mp3

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