This is a new track that I just finished up:
http://soundcloud.com/helion/pure-illusion

Any feedback, comments, or suggestions to help me improve would be much appreciated.

Thank you!

Idea is good, need work balancing out your different tracks... just seems what I wanted to hear was beoing drown out by things that should have been in the background

needs lots of work bro

-cut out low bass in the beginning. add a low cut filter to remove low freq below 60hz

-kick is outdated. sound like early 90s kick

-the melodic synths with high octave needs to have lower volume

- the passage in the beginning it is too silent, till the part where the audio kicks in.

-you need to blend your elements together. i think you need to learn a bit more on eqing. each and evey instrument on your track must be equed.
also their gains must be adjusted accordingly.


i think your new to music making, so dont be mad with these comments. work hard on eq + reverb. dont worry let the creative process continue!

Thanks to both of you guys for your comments - much appreciated!

Suneel - no worries I did not take it wrong, I am new, and I appreciate the constructive feedback.