this took me about 2 hours. It's just an intro for the song, albeit a long one. comments/criticism, please.

Download: Floyd - roughdraft

I plan on making a synth lead later on, the piano just isn't exciting enough to be the main lead.

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why is the production studio turning into the promotion forum?

post it on a streaming site mate, cbf downloading, makes it easier for everyone

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mixdown is horrible

i like the melody ;p

search my posts i don`t say quick i like something ;p
it needs only a different mix to fit my taste, i love to have the midi to just fool around with ;p

I didnt like the piano so much but then the tune dropped in and i thought ok maybe it works. The hi hats need some treatment though they are really dry and too high in the mix. Does say first draft though so nothin major.

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Your percussion is out of key.

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Originally posted by orTofønChiLd Your percussion is out of key.

Does tuning percussion actually make a difference?

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Very nice melody, but the bass that comes in around 2:44 is horrible. It doesn't fit in the mix, and the sound it self and the midi is pretty much out of place. A sweet, compressed, tight bass that goes with the kick would have been nice to this tune... my opinion...

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Originally posted by Beatflux Does tuning percussion actually make a difference?

White noise like some hi hats has useful harmonics so tuning just changes the timbre of the sound. matching timbre of sounds is important so I suppose yeah.

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Nice melody and chords here, but for me without wanting to sound big heasded, that's the easy part; Now for the slog of sound scuplting!

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