Bass is sick in the beginning, I would have put a crash or something at :29, that buildup deserves some kind of release.

There are some great ideas here, work on the transitions though, the song lacks flow. The transition out of the breakdown is awesome, though, great work on that.

Hi man,

I can see the beauty in there. This track has a lot of potential, if you spend more time on production side of it. Don’t worry, I have the same problem with my music. It will come, be patience, work hard and one day, sooner or later (in my opinion sooner) success will come.

Going back to your track, try to work on balance between instruments which have to coexist together with harmonic and natural balance and also on transitions which has to have smooth flow between different part of your song.

Who sad will be easy, so put your headphones back on and keep that music rolling, man.

Good work.

thanks everyone. i really do appreciate the feedback. take care everyone.

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