Originally posted by meriter
Your primary focus should be making good music. That's all. No one gives a shit how you do it. And the people that do are fags.
Oct-05-2009 08:33
cryophonik
Boom shanka
Registered: Jan 2008
Location: Elk Grove, CA USA
Nice remix, Nightshift! Overall, the mix sounds good, maybe a little on the boomy side for my taste, but solid and punchy. I like the arrangement and flow of the track as well. My only criticism is that the vocals have some harshness to them in the nasal range. I'd suggest sweeping around in the 1kHz-4kHz range and see if you can reduce some of that. Other than that, I really liked the mix - nice work!
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Oct-05-2009 18:21
Paul Sin
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Aug 2009
Location: IN Yer Ear
Wow that was really good! I am still trying to pick my jaw up off the floor.
Love the break down. Nice synth work. Good mixing. Nice solid track.
Paul
Oct-05-2009 18:32
TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
Good mix man. I like your idea for this track.
Keep them rolling.
Oct-05-2009 18:44
novastorm
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Perth, Western Australia
Hey man, a valiant effort here! I like your re-interpretation of the melody, for a sec I was scared that you weren't going to bring it back after the break lol but glad you did cos it's really good. as cryo said your vocals sound a little different from the acapella, kinda twisted around and yeah "nasal" in a way, not sure if I like the effect but I get what you were going for, trying to take some of the cheese factor off them to fit in with your progression which isn't as bright and happy as the original. Nice work overall, if all the entries are of this calibre then mine doesn't stand much chance! Haha
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Oct-06-2009 11:19
marcusk
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: 3rd Planet from the Sun
Hey, nice work on the remix. I think your bassline really moves the track along. IMO, I would have a added little more melody to the intro and maybe shortened the break down. Good luck on the contest anyways..
Originally posted by meriter
Your primary focus should be making good music. That's all. No one gives a shit how you do it. And the people that do are fags.
Oct-07-2009 22:44
MSZ
godspeed
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: kill me
g00d m4n
personally i would to hear the drop at 4:22 but im not one whos good with structure so don't care for it. cool how you mixed this, the kick has a lot of low sounds beefy, but the bass is pretty mid. some pro ass builds.
Oct-08-2009 06:20
sleeping
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2005
Location: swedscherland
was actually also working on a remix of that tune, but i lost interest with it. Nice remix you´ve done here. Nice arrangement and wellproduced. Im personally not that keen on long breakdowns, so the 2.5 min breakdwon tipped me off a bit. I would rather see that the climax around 4:20 would start it up. But that´s just my personal preferences. To conclude; nice job
Oct-08-2009 10:52
novastorm
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Perth, Western Australia
quote:
Originally posted by sleeping
was actually also working on a remix of that tune, but i lost interest with it.
i VERY nearly lost it too lol..
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Oct-08-2009 12:24
Bren-F
LostLegend
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Liverpool
Like this!
The track has a lots of energy and the synths/pads work really well with the vocals!
Good work!
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Oct-08-2009 20:19
Nightshift
...Ninja Business...
Registered: Oct 2005
Location: Sacramento, California
Thanks for the feedback guys, in all honesty I almost lost interest in it too from working on it too vigorously in the first 2 weeks of the competition.
Originally posted by meriter
Your primary focus should be making good music. That's all. No one gives a shit how you do it. And the people that do are fags.