Anyad (Original Mix) - Uplifting Trance by astrobouncer


New Uplifting Trance 4 by astrobouncer

Couple uplifting tracks I am still working on.

I am still pretty new at making trance so thoughts on what needs fixing/more work would be great. I appreciate any criticism or feedback, I can only get better if people tell me what I am doing wrong.

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Originally posted by echosystm because DAWs are for noobs. real pro's use a magnetised needle and a steady hand, hovering over a spinning hard drive platter, flipping one bit at a time.

Hi man!

01:26 i dont like that sound... BUT 01:37 I like the melody rly MUCH!!


well... I think you need to work a bit on effects with melodies going on and when you try to bring down the sounds to another melody (the pass) think more about some special effects (not 2 much though) something effective passing to another section in your track, with some nice samples, fx'es (cute off, reverbs etc) [I KNOW IM A GROUSER damn!] Melody on the beginning need some reverbs i guess and maybe a bit of delay add and dont like that "clap" at all.

THATS just my opinion and a vision of making some steps in producing a track.

Overall I like it, need some bits to be fixed but as You say ur pretty new at making trance so I can tell ya its fine as a beginner

keep it up mate

best regards
sheen trickz

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Definately better than the stuff I made when I started out

There's plenty that I would change but that's really down to my own personal preference and the style i've developed for myself over the last couple of years. One thing that I think needs looking at is the kick which is a bit wooly. Try layering another kick over the top that has a very quick attack, one that sounds quite clicky. It doesn't have to be loud at all and you can low pass most of it out but it'll help define the beat of the kick drum. You could even try playing with the timing of the clicky kick to alter the groove of the track.

Nice work for an alleged beginner!

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Thank both you guys for the feedback, it helps me tremendously. Unfortunately I have college and stuff to do this week (+ thanksgiving) so I cant make any changes till the weekend, but you can bet I will take your advice and improve from it. Thanks again!!!

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Originally posted by echosystm because DAWs are for noobs. real pro's use a magnetised needle and a steady hand, hovering over a spinning hard drive platter, flipping one bit at a time.

production is really tight, what did you use?
musically the track is decent, but it doesn't give you goosebumps or blow ur ears off. I'd say keep playing round till u come up with a riff or chord progression that moves you.

but keep up the good work