The vocals are just not sitting in the mix right imo.

Sounds like they're dry vocals just sitting on top of the track rather than mixed into it.

Musically it's ok, if a little cheesy. I like cheesy though

As much as it pains me to say it you might want to apply a liberal dash of auto tune to those vocals, FX em up and go for the Basshunter crowd.

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Can't add much more as to whats said above....

Working with vocals can be much harder then you think... keep at it mate

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