I had a listen and at first i was a little sceptical of the kick and percs but further on it merges quite nicely and becomes rather hypnotic , strange tune but good work.

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Bring on my soundcloud ya!

Very atmospheric.

I'd be tempted to create some movement in the ambience of the rain in the background as it sound a bit 'white noisey' at the moment. Maybe use a few different samples of rain and morph them between each other as the track progresses.

And more thunder!

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Very different track u have going on here, was quite hypnotic and I would develop what u got a bit more and extend the track. Yes more Thunder u would be great as tehlord said, I would have a few louder ones in the break.

post us newer mix when done

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It's not so shabby guys, it is very rare song and still working on tearms.many thanks for the replys keep them coming