Hello again, ive been working on this track, and put into practice alot of the critisism recieved in the last thread, fao everyone who did reply in the last thread, and also anybody else willing to listen. I hope the track has improved so much so, that it sounds better than my lat attempted mix. Please feel free to leave as much feedback as possible.

Thanks guys

http://www.sendspace.com/file/qomyz4

I love to listen to your track man. Give me a few.

Cheers.

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Step in right direction man.

Melody is great (a specially in 3:03, 3:21).
This pad - can you bright it up a bit, is gorgeous and need to be more juiceee on entry (when you going from tight sound to fully bright sound). This would give you this dramatic sound you are looking for.

Not far from finish man. Keep going with this, it is a lovely track.

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Thanks man!!

Yeah the pad i like in it now, do u mean it needs to be heard a lil more in the mix? Thats the feel i get from yourself, and you would be very right, needs to be "turned up" a lil more in the mix, especially when as you say the synth opens up intot hat more brighter sound.

Thanks for listening again mate, i think myself im on the verge of finsihing this, maybe highering that pad, could do it?

Yes, you are looking kind of "deadmau5" sound which is opening up a lot on entry (and is really heavy and thick in the same time).

You are not that far from your goal man.

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thanks alot for your support with this track man!

I hope more people can view thsi thread and comment also

why did you create another thread for the same track? bump your old thread with the update, dude.