House track? The intro drums has a very boring feel to it, so I would have fixed a more interesting opening. Maybe spiced it up with some vocals and some chopped live instruments, maybe some male speech and some quiet brass samples, like a chop of a jazzy trombone playing du-du-dududu. I think the track has lots of potential for new ideas, so I hope it's not the end.

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