Very good kick and a nice hats you've used.Also very nice pad in this track. The vocal is really beautiful.

Thanks

That open hat is pretty awful. That's just been done so many times. Why not try to get a more elaborate and dancable hat? The synth at 51 is pretty low quality. There is also no low end on the bassline. I would work on synth design if I were you. Are they all just presets?

At least your song idea comes through towards the middle and end, but the production is muddy and I hear tons of clashes. It seems like you're really close though, just go through the mix down and make sure you have all your synths and everything processed and EQ'd properly. Good luck.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 That open hat is pretty awful. That's just been done so many times. Why not try to get a more elaborate and dancable hat? The synth at 51 is pretty low quality. There is also no low end on the bassline. I would work on synth design if I were you. Are they all just presets? At least your song idea comes through towards the middle and end, but the production is muddy and I hear tons of clashes. It seems like you're really close though, just go through the mix down and make sure you have all your synths and everything processed and EQ'd properly. Good luck.

Do you mean the open hi hat is too plain?

Yeah they are all presets. I don't really know how to make my own synths. You mean low end frequencies on the bassline?

What do you mean by clashes?

"It seems like you're really close though, just go through the mix down and make sure you have all your synths and everything processed and EQ'd properly. "

I am still a noob and don't know what any of that means. Could you explain in laymen terms? Or at least point me out to a page or FAQ that I could read? I have no idea on how to mix, master, or equalize. Nor do I really know what those mean.

Thanks for the comments/critiques.

Last edited by beach1 on Dec-14-2009 at 21:53