so hey guys my latest track hope you enjoy it...
please tell me what im doing wrong too

awesome stuff, man! love the tech-aspects you are bringing along the journey, the break is nice as hell, percussions and the sound engineering part is top notch. this track definitely deserves more ear-attention.

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Last edited by Lascodi on Dec-07-2009 at 07:52

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Originally posted by Lascodi awesome stuff, man! love the tech-aspects you are bringing along the journey, the break is nice as hell, percussions and the sound engineering part is top notch. this track definitely deserves more ear-attention.

thanks alot mate hope to see some more of your stuff in the future as well
btw what daw are we using there?

Very spacey and atmospheric mix.

It might be worth taking a look at the low end of some of the parts as the mix gets a bit muddy sometimes (on my bud headphones).

Nice work.

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Very nice track.Realy like the melody in it.

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Nice spacey track but maybe the kick is a little flabby

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Originally posted by Johann Stone thanks alot mate hope to see some more of your stuff in the future as well btw what daw are we using there?

I've always been stuck to mr.unknown in the DAW-world, which is Synapse Orion. Rewired with Reason, although I tend to almost never use reason, just lots of vsti's.

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Originally posted by ******** too much reverb ---

how so?

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Originally posted by Johann Stone how so?

I think he means on the low end. Out in say the 2:30 range the low end is overwhelmed, possibly due to reverb on the Bass line? I think that is what he is getting at.

I also like the bright hit at the end of the break, and think you may want to keep the melody bright for longer after the break and then use the more tech styled melody as you build it out. Kind of like you have it, just without the first run of the tech melody. That's the only spot other then the slightly muddy low end that I feel is kinda od in the track. Good stuff still though!

I will say this though... hit me with a link at 128 so I can submit it as a demo for consideration at solarswarmdemos[at]gmaildotcom. You should know how to make that work. You could also just hit me with a PM with a link to DL it.

That is, if you are looking to get it signed. lol

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Very cool. Your melodies are awesome, everything goes very well together melodic wise. Great use of automation and fills to build tension. Only thing I heard is it does sound a little washy, maybe to much reverb on certain parts. Cut back on that so it gives it a more balanced mix. Other than that great track!!

Keep up the good work and can't wait to hear the final product

Feel free to check out my track as well.

Stiggy

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Originally posted by darthseph I think he means on the low end. Out in say the 2:30 range the low end is overwhelmed, possibly due to reverb on the Bass line? I think that is what he is getting at. I also like the bright hit at the end of the break, and think you may want to keep the melody bright for longer after the break and then use the more tech styled melody as you build it out. Kind of like you have it, just without the first run of the tech melody. That's the only spot other then the slightly muddy low end that I feel is kinda od in the track. Good stuff still though! I will say this though... hit me with a link at 128 so I can submit it as a demo for consideration at solarswarmdemos[at]gmaildotcom. You should know how to make that work. You could also just hit me with a PM with a link to DL it. That is, if you are looking to get it signed. lol

to start of id like to thank you for those awesome tips (especially about the bass) and ill take this into consideration and whenimdone ill send the demo
i hope you mean the bitrate when you say 128:'P

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Originally posted by Stiggy Very cool. Your melodies are awesome, everything goes very well together melodic wise. Great use of automation and fills to build tension. Only thing I heard is it does sound a little washy, maybe to much reverb on certain parts. Cut back on that so it gives it a more balanced mix. Other than that great track!! Keep up the good work and can't wait to hear the final product Feel free to check out my track as well. Stiggy

thanks alot for the comment andillgladly check out your tracks
and yeah ive learned a thingortwo about reverbs since imade this one
send reverbs should cut it i think and less of them

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